Students who are given grades work harder than those who do not. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Due to the benefits associated with this topic, some believe that Students
who are given grades work harder. I totally agree that when student get
grades have big motivate and they can use this motivate for improve
themselves. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following
essay.
To begin with, students who get grades in his lesson able to see how know this
topic. This is the best demonstrated by my personal experience. Since my
childhood teacher gave me grades for my work. It really helped me to improve
myself. I can understand how much I know. Also if I see, I have low grade, I try to
find and fix this problem. However, when child gets low grades he/she can be
unmotivated. But it’s small problem we can fix easy. Actually motivate is big
thinks for study. If child don’t have motivate for doing his/her work, he/she can’t
be successful in his work. Nowadays we last thinks which we attend is motivate
children. However, it is one of the key to being professional in work or study. In
other words, giving grades has a number of benefits.
Secondly, I believe that grades make in student’s rivalry feeling. Might be it is
one of the reason’s, why we have nowadays school’s grades. Moreover,
competition between children in lesson help make big motivation for them. For
instance, when I studied in school, we have really big competition in our class for
grades. Maybe for this reason in my class 90% of students are so clever and also
me.
In conclusion, I strongly believe students who are given grades work harder
than students who don’t get grade.Students who are given grades work harder than those who do not. Do you
agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your
opinion.
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