Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A mother is more essential to a child’s upbringing than a father. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important that children's behaviors are directly affected by the treatment of their parents. I personally believe that a mother is more responsible for the children's upbringing than a father. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, there is an unintended fact that a mother is more connected to her children both emotionally and characteristically. Because of this fact, usually, the behaviors of the mothers have more effects on their children's mentality and characteristics. Most people's traits depend on how they have grown up and how they have been treated in their childhood. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. For example, when I was a child my mother was so diligent in my politeness, and now I am a more polite person than my friends. So people are more sensitive to their mothers' behaviors than the treatments of their fathers. Secondly, in most societies fathers are responsible for the economy of the family, and this responsibility makes it harder to bring their child and do their jobs simultaneously. In these types of societies, it seems that mothers play a vital role in the creation of individuals' personalities, and fathers are more responsible for families' income. In conclusion, I strongly believe that mothers are more eligible to bring their child into our society. This is because they are more connected to their child emotionally and because in these societies fathers are more responsible for the family's economy.
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