Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people believe that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment, they are doing things they like to do than doing things they should do. Personally, I agree with this opinion because I think that today a little part of people are doing needed things and most of them are spending too much time on personal enjoyment things. In my essay, I will further explore my point of view. First of all, why do I think that at this time people spend too much time on personal enjoyment and doing things they like because they are mostly concentrated on their personal enjoyment and benefits every kind of things they like and love. Moreover, they do not have the skills to how to fix their important work and carrier development. They can not concentrate on their business and control time, which means that they have management problems. Second and foremost, why do I probably agree with this statement is because today everyone thinks about personal comfort zones and not about other people and their comfort, about the job and things they need and should do. These people who love comfort zones are concentrated just on themselves and spending time for fun. To sum up, it is clear that at this time situation, most the people are thinking about personal enjoyment and personal benefits just for themselves and I do not think that it is a positive side for people’s relationships because they are more concentrated on how to use other people for their funny time.
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