Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, in univercities, competitions, and other types of this parties people compete with each other. They seperate two groups : Perfect on many things and best on one profession. I disagree that it is not good to be perfect in the many area. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, I think that people if improve on the one topic, people will be famous. Statically, it is proven, because what if people have a business, they will advertise that they are professional in this topic. And it has benefits such as, learning new things and techniques, having a lot experiance, earning money that will make people rich. Thus, people do it nowadays, they will be rich. For example, Elon Musk, businessman, actor, engineer, web developer, and rich guy in the world. He has lots of companies, and he increase his legacy statically and functionally. He were web developer and he made a game, then he sold it. In this case he got his first money, when he was 10 years old. Then he made lots of things and he sold. And we see everytime him in the newspaper or e-news. He did he profession and he gained. It means that everyone do it. Secondly, most people do just business, because they believe that they will acquire a payment. And this way aren't way of them. They do it for money, not profession. In our country, most people do this, because they like gaining not feeling perfect. Yes, it causes to hormons and psychology also. If people do work for their benefits, that is low percentage that they will be rich. For instance, my friend, Mehmet, he does a business like selling. However he says that he hates this work. Because this work is not for him, but he must do. In conclusion, it is not better to be above average at many things than be excellent at one thing. I strongly believe that everyone should do their professions.
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