Some people say that the Internet provides us with a lot of valuable information. Others believe that too much information on the Net causes many problems. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

For most, getting information from the Internet plays an important role in their life. Some people might think that too much information on the Net causes many problems because many people to be hurt by cybercrime that came from too much information. I, however, agree with the Internet provides us with a lot of valuable information. First, many people already know about the method of searching. Second, useful substitutes have existed. First of all, the method of searching already widespread. These days, a lot of information is around on the Internet however people can distinguish what right searching is. Plus, right searching can protect people from many problems that came from too much information. For example, two weeks ago, my sister Jessica’s high school held one competition, which competes for each other in each class by writing an essay that related to Great Depression. Surprisingly, Jessica’s class won the competition. This is because before the competition teacher John taught her class’s the method about right searching. Therefore, although a great amount of information has circulated on the Internet, the class could gain valuable and useful information about Great Depression. Second, existing substitutes allow people to get valuable information on the Internet. Nowadays, almost all of people prefer both accurate and gaining valuable information. Actually, the many substitutes such as e-book came up that makes people can get both accurate and gaining valuable information. More specifically, according to 2019 from 2020 Oxford University statistics, the more people who use e-book 78.6percent increased, the more valuable information can be accumulated to people 67.9percent increased. Moreover, it can completely account for the substitutes can provide a great amount of valuable information to people. To sum up, I firmly agree with the opinion that the Internet provides us with a lot of valuable information. Is not it find valuable information you too through the Internet?
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